Highbank Primary and Nursery School


This week we would like you to write a story all about the pobble image The Large Sea Wall. We have included a story starter below to help your imagination. We would love you to include parenthesis. Remember that you can use brackets, dashes or commas to do this.


Story starter

Time seemed to be standing still. Frost covered the top of the submarine like icing on a cake. Something strange had been brewing under the water for days. Something terrible. Something powerful.


With an almighty roar, like a helicopter taking off, the sea all around the vessel began to rise up. Up and up and up it rose, forming menacing walls of darkness all around him. The Captain felt powerless. His fate, and the fate of his crew, lay in the hands of the mighty ocean. All he could do was watch. And wait.